Thursday, June 4, 2009

15 chapter

Time was everything now once the decision was made time was vital. But Brian a minute to scan the map once more and and do some mental calculating and it didnt come up too

14th chapter

He had notice it before of course when they went over the map in his house and when they had first landed

13 chapter

Somewhere Brain thought somewhere hed heard something qabout comas he must have. Something more than he could remember. But it had to be in his mind

12th Chapter

the rest of that day and through the night he kneeled next to derek. waiting. He only moved to get a drink and eat some berries and go to the bathroom the rest of the time he kneeled nextto Derek putting a piece of wood on the fire.

11th chapter

Before his eyes opened there was light through the eyelids brright light but they didnt want to open and focus. he tasted things smelled things. Something was burned there was the stink of somthing burned.

10th chapter

for a moment he could not tell what had brought him up from sleep. They had banked the fire well and the coals would last until morining. It was stillo warm qnd red giving off a little smoke.

Wednesday, May 20, 2009

the 8th chapter

The 8th chapter is about Derek and Brian in the forest. Brian is teaching Derek about survial in the forest and how to get water and food in the forest and staying alive.